Description of the house

Description of the House in Detail to Sell it.

This is a very big house, surrounded by grass and gravel, it has two storeys and a lot of windows. Passing through the entrance you may find a big brown door, behind it there’s a stair that leads you to the second floor and a little lobby, to the left there’s a living room that has three sofas, in the middle of the living room there is a coffee table with some vases on it, then hanging on the wall there are two flower paintings above the sofa, in the same wall beside the paintings we have two small windows that bring light to the house. Above the windows there are two more coffee tables with lamps on it.

Then we will find the dining room with a big table in the center of it, the table has six chair around it and on the table there are two candles. Above the table, hanging on the ceiling there is a chandelier. At the end of the room there’s a cupboard  with some glasses and mirrors, this room also has a window on the left side wall, at the left

 

of the window it has a painting hanging on the wall and another one hanging beside the cupboard, at the right side of it there is a big decorating plant and the entrance of the laundry room that has 2 cabinets, one of the cabinet is upper than the other ,and 2 washing machines are next to each other.

If you exit to the right of the laundry, you will find a beautiful room that is divided in the kitchen room and in the living room. The part of the living room has 2 brown couch with cushions, and 1 white couch with one red flowered cushion, a thin LED tv in the middle of the living room, there are 2 vases and a piece of furniture with a plate under the tv, there are 3 lamps in the room, 2 of them are beside of the brown sofa that is next to the wall, and  on the same sofa are 2 paintings. And in front of the other couch at the center of the room there is  a coffee table that has two decorations cogwheels on it. The kitchen part  has a table with flowers on it, and 4 chairs in the 4 sides of the table. Beside the table there is a glass door that takes you to the patio, in the right side of the kitchen there is a sink to wash the dishes above that there is a long cabinet to store food, next to it there is a grey kitchen with a motorhome cooker hood above following the sequence of the cabinet to the right we can find a big, large and grey fridge. There is a small red bathroom in the first floor at the right of the stairs.

Then walking upwards by the stairs, there is two paintings that you’ll see above the landing they have birds painted on it. Reaching the second floor you going to see a small corridor protected by rails that are made of dark brown wood, On front of the stairs you will see two rooms, in the right side it’s the Bedroom number 4, It is a room decorated for a little boy, it has a window that shows you the front yard, so it receives a lot of illumination on sunny days, the floor is covered by a wall to wall carpet, to the right side of the bed, there is a night table where you can put objects inside and on it. On the wall it has a big painting of a dinosaur to give a interesting design to the bedroom. Walking back to the corridor, in the right side you’ll find a little spot, there is located a small Linen where you can store your clothes or whatever you want. On the other hand in the front of the Linen, there is the Bedroom 3 that is intended for a girl, because it is more spacious than the previous one, so she can keep all her things inside without disturbing somebody else. It has a less child design, but maintaining the essence of a Girl’s room, On the wall there is a painting and below this is the night table, similar to the decoration of the previous room, but there’s a change with the windows, It has two windows making it brighter than the boy’s room. The room includes a full decorated design including a desk and a chest of drawers.

Going out the girl´s room there is a small corridor with a handrail at the side there is the stairs that takes you to the first floor, following the corridor you can find a stance with two little red couches with a lamp next to it and a cabinet, the main room with a big bed at the center of it, at the left side to the bed there is a big decorating plant and a small night table with a lamp and some family pictures on it, next to it there is a window and a door that takes you to a big walk in closet.

The bedroom 2 (See second floor plan) has a bed covered with a bedspread with a pattern of  leaves and many pillows on it. It seems like a room decorated for the grandmother of a family. At the side of the bed there is a black bedside table with a white lamp on it and three books and a small plant. At the other side of the bed there is another black bedside table with a white lamp on it and two pictures. In the bedroom there is a black chest of drawers with a small plant, a white lamp, two books and a fruit dish on it. At the corner of the bedroom by the wall there a big plant just in between of a small and a big window. The walls of the bedroom are painted in light brown and there are some pictures on the wall. The bedroom has its own big walk in closet and inside it there are three additional pillows and many clothes hangers. The walk in closet has its own window. On the wall at the opposite side of the bed there is a big painting.

The main bedroom is quite big. It has three windows, so it receives a lot of illumination on sunny days. It’s a room decorated for the parents of a family. It has a  comfortable big bed with a bedside table at each side of it. The floor is covered by a wall to wall carpet. The wall behind the bed is painted in red and the others walls of the room are painted in light brown. There is a sofa and two chest of drawers in the room , one of them  with a big mirror  on it.

The corridor that takes you to the bathroom have two walk in closet at both sides, in the bathroom you can find a floor made with floor tile, also a slide door shower with a white towel hanging on a banister, next to it a white bathtub with a window at the side of it, at the left side you can find a nice flower picture hanging on the wall and following to the left there is a washbasin with a mirror for you to see your beauty.

General reflection

I have learnt so much in this subject starting from; how to write, how to use commas, colons, and semi colons.  The usual mistakes like run on a sentence, choppy sentences and other things like F.A.N.B.O.Y.S. ( for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) or my problems with grammar and how I organized  my ideas. Although I have improved a pinch in some time because I can correct my errors and re organize my ideas after an error with less difficulty than before. And all of that it's just a part that I could learn of this beautiful subject.

Pre writing

Process of writing.

- Get ideas.

- Organise.

- Write.

- Check.

- Idea.

- Clarity.

- Grammar. 

- Punctuation.




Mistakes of writing.

-Run on a sentence : It means to have problems with the punctuation.

- Choppy sentences : It means to have many stops on sentences interrupting ideas.



           

My favorite place

Draft.

My favorite place is the beach.

I love the beach because is a relaxing place where I can think without any distraction. I also go with my friends and enjoy the sun, clouds, and the sand. I also do sports there so I spend many time there doing things that I enjoy like drink a fruit juice, eat "churros" or hot dogs. However is good place to do eveything that you want. If you don't like the sun, you can be under a palm tree and be happy reading a  book. 

Final text.

My favorite place the beach. 

I love the beach because it's a relaxing place where I can think without any distraction and loose in my thoughts. I also go with my friends and enjoy everything that is there. I also do sports at the beach, so I spend many time there doing things that I enjoy like drink a fruit juice, eat "churros" or hot dogs. However is a good place to do eveything that you want. If you don't like the sun, you can be under a palm tree and be happy reading a  book. 

My favorite person

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My favorite person.-

My mother is slim, short and she is in her forty's. She also has long, straight, and brown hair, her eyes are oven and brown and her complex skin is fair. She has much strength, she has fun when the people trip over or when the people scarred. I don't understand why but she always laughs when sees it.

She is too stubborn sometimes but in a nice way, sometimes is agressive because my siblings and I annoy her talking, shaking and scarrying her and all of that just for being borred, my mother is reliable, she always is for us and tries to help everyone and she also shares everthing with everybody I can say that she is too generous, kind and trustworthy person. Sometimes she think in herm other and father so she tell them to come here to the house because they live in different cities.

Final text.

My favorite person is my mother. She is slim, short and she is in her forty's. She also has long, straight, and brown hair, her eyes are oval and brown and her complex skin is fair. She is muscular she has fun when the people trip over or when the people scarred. I don't understand why, but she always laughs when she sees it.

She is too stubborn sometimes, but in a nice way. Sometimes she is agressive because my siblings and I annoy her talking, shaking and scarrying her and all because we are bored. Although my mother is reliable, she always is for us and tries to help everyone, she also shares everthing with everybody I can say that she is too generous, and trustworthy person. Sometimes she think in her mother and father so she tells them to come here to the house because her parents live in different cities.

Oktapody

 Draft

It was a normal day in a fish tank. In that fish tank was living 2 octopuses. One male called Dino and one female called Tina. They were in love for many time and they have promised to each other that nobody will separate them. One normal day in the fish tank Tina and Dino were hugging when Tina was caught by a strange hand that pull Tina out  of the fish tank and put in a weight for be sold and finally cooked in fancy restaurant. Dino after seeing how they were taking Tina, he jumped out of the fish tank and went for her. He saw the van where Tina was grabbed, so he stuck on the truck and went to the window when suddenly the driver looked Dino and screamed. Dino was scarred but he tried to reach Tina, but the drive hit Dino right in the face. Tina could see out of the box in where she was, so she quickly thought in pull the handbreak and she did it although Tina and Dino were launched out to the street because the van started to spin. The octopuses were knocked and the driver was dizzy but he recovered more quickly that the octopuses and tried to catch them again but they got to a pool that was near  in the exact moment when he was stretching his hand out of the van. When he saw that he couldn't catch them he still driving down while Tina and Dino were jumping pool by pool.  The driver was mad while he was driving, he also was out of the van trying to catch Tina and Dino with a rod and he made it but they spread ink on his face and went out of the car. The driver couldn't see anything untill he crushed into a house and fell to the sea. The octopuses were safe hunged in a rope until a bird took Dino and brought them to the sky, but Tina reached with her tentacles the bar of the balconies that were closed  and jumped with strength to the bird and hit them right in the face and three fell down, the octopuses remembered all their life until they crashed into the blue water and they were happy again, but the bird crashed into the water and it couldn't fly for some time. End

Oktapody 

It was a sunny day in  greece, in a small fish store it was a  fish tank.and in that fish tank was living 2 octopuses. One male called Dino and one female called Tina. They were in love for many time and they have promised to each other that nobody will separate them. One normal day in the fish tank Tina and Dino were hugging when Tina was caught by a strange hand that pull Tina out  of the fish tank and put in a weight for be sold and finally cooked in fancy restaurant. Dino after seeing how they were taking Tina, he jumped out of the fish tank and went for her. He saw the van where Tina was grabbed, so he stuck on the truck and went to the window when suddenly the driver looked Dino and screamed. Dino was scarred but he tried to reach Tina, but the drive hit Dino right in the face. Tina could see out of the box in where she was, so she quickly thought in pull the handbreak and she did it although Tina and Dino were launched out to the street because the van started to spin. The octopuses were knocked and the driver was dizzy but he recovered more quickly that the octopuses and tried to catch them again but they got to a pool that was near  in the exact moment when he was stretching his hand out of the van. When he saw that he couldn't catch them he still driving down while Tina and Dino were jumping pool by pool.  The driver was mad while he was driving, he also was out of the van trying to catch Tina and Dino with a rod and he made it but they spread ink on his face and went out of the car. The driver couldn't see anything untill he crushed into a house and fell to the sea. The octopuses were safe hunged in a rope until a bird took Dino and brought them to the sky, but Tina reached with her tentacles the bar of the balconies that were closed  and jumped with strength to the bird and hit them right in the face and three fell down, the octopuses remembered all their life until they crashed into the blue water and they were happy again, but the bird crashed into the water and it couldn't fly for some time. End 

 

My weirdest dream

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I have this dream many times, but it's the weirdest dream that I ever had until now. I'll start from the beggining. I'm in a desert that has shiny sand, the light doesn't burn my skin, although everything is lightened, in that desert isn't a noise but rocks are falling from a big dune that has stone pillars and ancient totems.  Those stone pillars also look like towers, but the only thing that I can think in that moment is to climb that giant dune avoiding the rocks. The salt of the sand starts to flying in the air and I can fell that salt in my nose but that doesn´t stop me, so when I'm in the middle of the giant dune I start to crawl for reaching the top then the wind start to blow and I forget where I'm and I wake up in my bed with those weirds memories of my dream.

Final text.

I have this dream many times, but it's the weirdest dream that I ever had until now... I will star from the begining... I'm in a desert that has a shiny sand that it's lightened by a sun that doesn't burn my skin with its light. There is a noise in a part of this desert that grows slowly, this noise is produced by giants rocks that are falling and breaking the silence of the desert. I think that I can reach the top of a giant dune where the rocks are falling, so I start to walk, then climbing and finally crawling because something calls me from the top of the dune. I look around me while I'm in this mountain and I see stone pillars in random places, and ancient totems that have been there for so long, then  something peaceful comes to my mind and makes me think that it isn't a bad place and it's beauty and calm, but this thought is interrupted by the wind that blows with strength, then the sand starts to spin around me and finally I wake up... 

Welcome to my blog

In this blog I will show you all my activities made in classes, the things I have learnt, and how much I enjoy doing this type of activity because, it's the second time that I have to do an activity like this and i love write thoughts, poems, etc.

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